They will if a tool fills in a template and nobody reads the result. Write from one true fact about the person, keep it short and read it before it goes. Your buyer then has no reason to wonder who wrote it.
Both go to the same person. The second writer read about her first.
Anna is CEO of Harjula Coatings in Finland.
The company opened a second plant in Poland in September.
She said reporting across two countries is now the hard part.
Hi Anna, I noticed Harjula Coatings’ impressive growth! I wanted to reach out because we help companies like yours streamline their finance operations and unlock new levels of efficiency. Would you be open to a quick chat?
Best regards,
Mikko
Hi Anna, you said in September that reporting across Finland and Poland is now the hard part. I set up group reporting for two Nordic manufacturers when they opened abroad. Would a 20-minute call about your month-end be useful?
Best regards,
Mikko
We made up this company, this person and this sender to show the shape of the email.
“still sounds a bit off. Too clean.”
“People just sense when it’s AI.”
We ban these words and openings by name.
Emails stay short and carry no exclamation marks.
Wisemation reads the company’s website and a summary of the person’s LinkedIn, then picks one fact that gives you a reason to write now. When it finds nothing worth saying, the email says less.
A separate check hunts for any name that did not come from the research. When it finds one, the writer has to try again.
Wisemation compares each draft with your recent emails, so ten buyers do not get the same sentence.
It learns how you write from emails you have sent. It writes in English, French, German, Spanish, Italian, Portuguese, Dutch, Polish, Swedish, Norwegian, Danish or Finnish.
Nothing goes out until you agree. Change any line yourself or ask for a rewrite in your own words.
Take out whatever you would not say to the person’s face.
Hi Anna, you said in September that reporting across Finland and Poland is now the hard part. I set up group reporting for two Nordic manufacturers when they opened abroad. Would a 20-minute call about your month-end be useful?
“I bet one way to not sound like AI is to not use AI.”
You write to five people a week and you already know them.
You need to reach people you have never met and you do not have the hours to read about each one.
Sometimes. A few buyers will assume it whatever you send. A short email about something they said or did still gives them a reason to answer.
Wisemation writes each one from research on that person and compares it with your recent emails before you see it.
No. You see every email first, and nothing goes out until you agree.
You describe your buyer once. The people and the emails come back for you to check.
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